
The following is some advice I have for writing recaps and reviews for television series
Before I start let me say this:
Don't stress over rules. If you can't recap or review every episode, that's ok. We're not paid staff and if you can't write about each episode or don't want to review every episode that's fine. You can take a page from Vacelts playbook and just review and recap shows periodically, focusing on a particular angle or theme.
First, record the show you are watching multiple times either through dvr, videotape or whatever. More on that in a minute. If you watch the program you are reviewing multiple time jot down your first impressions because what seems funny the first time might not seem as funny the fifth time.
Second, use examples. Don't just say the show has weak or clichéd dialogue. Better to give examples. To do that you may need to have a recording of the show as suggested above. When recapping House, for example, I like to quote from the show and to do that I have to listen to some parts more than once.
Third, watch for plot holes or plot twists. Another reason to have a recording is that something that may not seem important in the first act may turn out to be crucial in a later act, or vice versa. Now that is not likely to be a problem when recapping American Idol but could easily happen in shows that contain twists.
Fourth, watch the show with an open mind. That means that if you're, say, not a fan of cop shows and you're watching and recapping the show in order to prove your argument true… well, if you do that then admit that bias in your preview. Better yet, don't recap a show you are not a fan of because a) you are not going to enjoy it and that will likely shine through to the reader and b) you will be looking for examples to hate on the show. The obvious exception to this is American Idol, the show everyone loves to hate. Some of the best pieces I've read about Idol come from people who don't like it. But that's the exception not the rule. Generally I'd say if you, like me, are not a fan of the Law and Order franchise then don't go recapping it because I don't think that will be enjoyable to write or to read. Believe me, I know from writing and reporting that if the writer isn't enjoying what he's writing then the reader won't enjoy it either.
Fifth, don't recap without reviewing and don't review without recapping. Let me explain: In my experience, the hardest part about writing reviews and recaps of TV shows is knowing how much to focus on summarizing a show and how much to focus on giving your opinions on the show. I've learned this the hard way. I once tried recapping the Daily Show. I don't know what I was thinking - there are few things less funny than talking about why a joke is funny or trying to summarize a humorous premise. On the other hand it's hard to analyze and review a show without explaining what exactly happened.
Here's the problem in a nutshell: You can't assume the reader has seen the episode. So naturally you need to recap the show somewhat. But if you focus too much on just recapping the show then the reader who has seen the show will wonder what the value was on reading a summary of something they have already seen. There's no magic formula or equation that says how much should be a summary and how much should be an analysis.
Sixth, read other recaps and reviewers. For example, I like to read Television Without Pity's reviews of all shows I watch. I do this partially because the writing there is consistently funny and snarky. But I'm also curious to see what they got out of it that I didn't.
Seventh, get a second opinion and be open to constructive criticism. I think many reviews can benefit from having someone else read them. Actually almost anything you write can benefit from having someone else reading them but it is especially true when writing about a program which you saw which others did not see. The easy trap to fall into – one writers often won't realize they are falling for – is to assume that the readers will know what you are referring to because you are more familiar with the series or the episode than they are. Better to over explain than under explain.
Lastly, please edit your copy. Don't just write it and publish it. There are multiple tricks to editing your copy and if there is interest I can write a follow-up piece on some of those, which range from reading it printed out (you'll see things you didn't see on the screen) to reading it backwards – start at the last paragraph and work your way up. The idea in both cases is that you will see where you have skipped over words or sentences which you have inserted mentally and you can then fix it.
Like it or not people will take your copy more seriously – and MSNBC will be more likely to pick up your article – if it is free of distracting grammatical errors.
Personally, my method is to only watch each episode of Lost once before my recap goes up. Luckily, I'm a pretty fast typist, so as the episode goes I take extremely detailed notes on everything that's happening. Almost every line of dialog is recorded, along with settings, actions, etc. Then either during the commercial breaks or after the show has gone off, I spin all that into a more brief narrative.
For example, my notes might say:
Locke asks Ben if he can trust him, Ben says he can as long as he trusts the island, Locke says Ben is playing the island for his own purposes, Ben says he just follows Jacob. Locke asks who Jacob is, Ben just stares at Locke.
(Don't worry about spoilers, I just made up that exchange). At any rate, that might be shortened to:
Locke distrusts Ben, but Ben counters by saying that he serves the Island and Jacob. Locke asks about the nature of Jacob, and Ben goes silent.
It helps things flow a bit easier. When you're summarizing an entire episode you need some shortcuts like that, but I'm careful not to cut out dialog that I think is important to know word-for-word. Having a DVR helps, because if I miss a line I can just rewind and check it again.
So basically, I don't watch and rewatch episodes to recap them, so I suppose I don't follow that part of the plan. But I've established my own little method and it seems to work for me. The best advice is to find what works best for you.
I agree with Steve, I usually only watch a show once. The DVR recording is just for clarifications.
Makes sense.
great advice, scott. i'm still working on my style for my tv reviews and i would say that the only place i veer from your pointers is on recapping - i write the article for people who have seen the episodes and who want to read a commentary about them. thats a result of my own reading habits - i hardly ever read a review of a program until i've seen it myself. at the same time, i try to keep the conclusions i draw in each article free of plot twists and too much detail. it's still a work in progress and i'm trying to keep them somewhat familiar to my own personal style of writing. at the same time, i like to play with words and try to capture elements of each show without directly referring to them, like in my scrubs review, saying "they have the ball to make fun of themselves," intentionally leaving "ball" in the singular, which is only understandable for people who watched the episode, in which turk deals with the loss of one of his testicles.
but i do employ a trick that might be useful to others - i mostly write the reviews as the shows are airing, and i do go back and edit and re-watch scenes as needed. but i also do a quick write-up of where the shows are in terms of character and story before the episode airs. especially for shows that have ongoing plot arcs, i think it helps to capture the POV of "the viewer" going into the episode - and it's also a good way to enhance the review with some relevant backstory. i do it ahead of time because once the show airs, the POV shifts to favor that most recent episode, and it's easy to forget, at that point, where the different characters were in the beginning - after watching a character do something strange, for example, it can be hard to define (and back up with examples) the way the character had acted in previous episodes. it provides a good contrast and it's a nice way to add context to the review.
I have to watch the episode twice before I'm comfortable recapping/reviewing it. The first time around I'm writing down what happened, and specifically I'm catching oddities, questions. Battlestar Galactica lends itself so well to that. The second watching allows me to catch everything I missed.
Bones was a riot. House was meh.
I'm around. I'm always around. Sometimes even sneaking a peak during lunchtime. ;-) I've just been so busy.
Bones was a riot. House was meh.
I'd have to agree. Bones is one of my favorite shows.
I'm a huge fan of David B. I love his subtle humor. I liked him better on Angel than on Buffy.
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